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Definitely award-worthy

_________________Graphics
Although they're sprites, they're absolutely astounding. Every character comes to life in their own fighting styles, and the battle combinations are extremely well executed. For all of the flashes I've ever seen that involved combat, this had the best graphics and flow I've ever seen. The cross-over of the character are very well assembled, and it makes sense. Not a single sprite looks sketchy or out of place.
Graphics: 10/10
_____________Style
Even though there's thousands of submissions with sprites of Mario, Sonic, Luigi, and others, this submission puts them all together into one fine stew of kick-assery and excitement. Every event that happens and every attack will make you gasp with surprise. When the story progresses, the events make sense and fit perfectly as if Nintendo and Sega each came up with this themselves, with the help of Funimation corp.
Style: 10/10
_______________Sound
For all of the attacks, songs, and other sound effects, all of them deliver a significant impact to every occurrence within the cartoon's storyline. For every punch, kick, throw, hilarious scream, and explosion, the sound effects are perfectly timed and each match the graphics provided on the screen. The music selected masterfully fits every single solitary scene within the show.
Sound: 10/10
______________Violence
Positively wondrous. The providence of violence without any blood or gore makes it very friendly to preteens. Sparks and punches substitute nasty images possible for the combat within each scene. This just goes to show you can have maximum combat and full violence without the blood and gore that are in most of the shows on Newgrounds today. Also, little kids can watch this and not be scared.
Violence: 10/10
_____________Interactivity
The ability to press space after reading the dialog boxes provides maximum interactivity and efficiency. The invisible buttons are very good for computers running on their last bit of life, or for computers that don't have the greatest graphics card. Things many people will enjoy about this flash:
1- The ability to see the scene names when scrolling over to them
2- Ability to watch a specific scene with no glitches or bugs
3- Pressing space to continue with dialog
There's so many things that can be done with sprites, however this is one of the greatest uses of them all. The story interactivity with the dialog boxes allows for maximum enjoyment and opens so many doors to fans. So far you've provided 6 episodes, and the rest of Newgrounds expects more from your talented hands.
Interactivity: 10/10
________Humor
The humor is shown without any dialog most of the time, which allows anyone to understand the funny situations. The screams and cries make anyone laugh and chuckle often. Possible insider jokes are within the contents of every frame, the humor is maximum and better than ever.
Humor: 10/10

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Overall:
There's nothing really wrong with this flash. Every hit, punch, sound effect, implement of humor, interactive point, and song fits like a glove with every scene.

PROS CONS
-Classic -Let's see more, please!
-Fun

OMG A LIFE POINT 1 PRODUCTION!

I thought I'd never see a new one again! Thank you so much for making another submission! Your flashes are my CRACK.

Wow....

This is a really amazing piece of work. Am I the only one who thinks this should be in the top 50 best flash ever?

MidNightMaren responds:

Well, maybe you are the only one really :P
Thanks!

Whoa!

PLEASE send me a PM and give me that song as an Mp3! That song rocks!

9/10

Improvements__________
-Graphics could be a pinch better
-Make it longer next time (The song is awesome)

Good points___________
-Awesome music
-Good graphics
-Funny cameos

Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to see the first episode!

Wow!

People give 5s on this so much that the rating doesn't go up any higher!

A truly amazing marvel of a submission

This is an amazing piece of work. This unrecognized diamond should have been put on the top 50 best ever made. Thanks for entertaining me.
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Score
10/10
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Ways to improve:
Nothing, it's perfect
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Awesome

Nice vid. By the way. What do the buttons on the side do? I really didn't pay attention to them.

Hm...

This movie is okay.
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Exact score: 5.65/10
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Ways to improve:
Basically the only fault to this cartoon is the violence was not portrayed in a well enough manner to capture laughter. In other words, to put it bluntly, the graphics were very bad, considering you wanted it to look violent and funny. If you spend just a smidge more time with the graphics, add some blood effects, put in some bone crackling sound effects, and put a little more detail on how he gets hit by the car, that would surely make the crow laugh really hard.

Another thing is the variety of color. There were pretty plain colors in the video. Try to change the styles by customizing your own colors in the program you are using. Many of the problems I've seen as a flash viewer is that the depth of color is rather lacking. I've seen many flash users and artists improve significantly through selecting different depths of color. You'll be surprised how much shine it will bring out of your video.

The next problem to talk about is the animation itself. I can see you did not use as many frames as you could for the video. Once again, many flash artists learn from that, and add far more frames, and then the flash video becomes a masterpiece. When a flash video lacks frames, or looks like it is lagging usually mean the artist rushed and threw together the piece, ultimately resulting in the downfall of its potentially high score.

The fourth flaw is the music. It really did not seem to fit the video... I noticed this, because one of the notes hit high, and he didn't get hit by the car. I would have laughed if the song fit the video more. There's always going to be a flaw in a video, but this one is seen far too often.

Graphics-
Could have been far better. You have a lot of potential with flash, and you are not using it.

Style-
I'll give you points for an attempt, but you really need to improve on originality. There are most points in this video that are really sketchy and could be worked on.

Sound-
Um... I really don't know what to say on this one. The music really did not fit the video you created, not to mention, it wasn't a very good song to begin with. Try a wider variety of music to add to your flash. This is yet another problem seen in some to most of the flashes here on newgrounds. Thankfully, in this case, the music did not have any static noises that could puncture my ear drums.

Violence-
Here's where the video dropped somewhat the most. The violence was not portrayed in the way you wanted, correct? You can always go back and fix the flash, and then re-submit it. There really was no violence here, just a frame going up and down.

Interactivity-
(Skip)

Humor-
Meh. This is another weak point in the flash. You could have improved on this greatly. Really, the humor was not even existant up to this point. The flash itself needs to be graphically tweaked... A lot, in order to show the hilarity you really wanted to show your audience, instead of... Well.... This, you could have spent a little more time, and then submitted the flash. If you had done that, then you could have made this flash in the possible top 20 of the week.

Overall-
The graphics were not gold crown material, but they were okay for an apparently rushed product. It was a decent flash, but it had many flaws. Another problem with the flash is the length. There was not enough content to please the audience to your desire. There were some easy-to-fix flaws as well, ones that could have taken a flew clicks of the mouse and a few taps of the keyboard. I definitely can see that this was rather rushed... Please, fix this flash and update the graphics, content, put a better music clip in there, and hey, add sound effect files to make the car have noises, as well as Harry. There are also some flaws that came right from the beginning. Harry really did not get 'owned to hell' by the car like I had expected. The graphics were to blame.

Please, spend more time on the next episode, bring out your flash potential!
-From
Leon401

Best flash ever

Keep going! They rock!

Stuck smack dab in the middle

It's not a terrible flash, and it's not really the best flash in the world. It's decent. Exact score I gave you: 6.43 out of a possible 10.00 .
~Good point:
Funny way to fiddle around with pixels
~Bad point:
You need voicovers, it makes it all the more hilarious.

Spark-Pro responds:

Thanks. I'll use that in future movies.

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